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Wednesday
04Nov2009

query 1

I have been writing for nearly four years. I have written several stories on fanfiction, and I have published a few short stories on fictionpress. I am currently enrolled in a writer's class to further improve my writing, and I am planning on joining my school newspaper when school starts.

The Vampire in the Attic (53,784 words) is about an outcast who discovers that a vampire has been living in her grandmother's attic for nearly sixty years. She quickly befriends him and is determined to help him remember his forgotten past. Although as they uncover his past, they realize that the dangers of his lost past is catching up with him. When a friend looked over it for me to proof-read, she commented on how it seemed like Twilight, but it is different. The main character, Ashley, is a very strong and independent woman and Alex, the vampire, isn't technically a vampire. It's hard to explain, but it is a surprise I hope that you are willing to discover.

 

 


Wednesday
04Nov2009

query 2

THE LIGHT OF DAY is an 85, 000-word mainstream novel with the attention on an exploited girl from Mexico. Set in the city of Chicago, the story is related by a young, single African American attorney.

Seventeen-year-old Michael Bradley spots the sad girl of unimaginable beauty, Carlotta Rivera in a storefront window of a brothel, and she is implanted in his memory forever. (Fourteen-year-old Carlotta Rivera was brought from Mexico to Chicago by her uncle, Juan Rivera for prostitution). Reverend Robert Peterson, a White Presbyterian minister is passing the window where the girl is plying her trade, and is so touched that he rescues her, taking her home to become a part of his family. Years later, attorney Michael Bradley has good fortune when he is in the hospital and Carlotta Rivera is the registered nurse attending to his broken leg. Michael Bradley’s half-brother, Duc Le, a physician begins courting the lovely Carlotta Rivera.

Benjamin Peterson, the minister son of Rev. Robert Peterson has been obsessed with the Mexican beauty from the day his father brought young Carlotta into his family. Nevertheless, he contains his feelings and continues his relationship with fiancee Crystal Jennings. When Benjamin Peterson discovers the truth associated with his adopted sister Carlotta Rivera, anger drives him to go after Juan Rivera, a professional gambler, now living in Shreveport, Louisiana. Nevertheless, the mafia has beat Benjamin Peterson to the punch, and he finds the dastardly Juan Rivera in his seedy hotel room on the bed, dead from a bullet shot to the head.

There are serious problems in the marriage of Rosalyn and Arthur Bradley, the parents of Michael Bradley, another woman has Arthur Bradley’s affections. Michael’s brother, Paul is facing mounting problems as the new president of a Black College. Emily Bradley, the sister loses her T.V. anchor job. Nonetheless, she encounters nationally known environmentalist Jim McCullen and romance develops. Kathy Hatley Morris, a girl Michael Bradley knew from his teen years receives his attention. She’s separated from her abusive husband, and lives with her two young sons. Kathy is a wonderful person with a dream of becoming an opera singer. With Michael Bradley’s encouragement, before long she is an opera success story. Sadly, a brain tumor takes her young life. Vivian, the sister of Rosalyn Bradley is in a long-term relationship with a married U.S. Senator. Janie, Michael Bradley’s young cousin dies from wild living. The relationship of Doreen and Rodney Bradley shocks everyone in the family. Once Michael Bradley expresses his feelings for Carlotta all is well and a wedding follows.  Michael Bradley enters the ministry. Plus, there are many more interesting developments.

THE LIGHT OF DAY is an 85,000-word novel created just for readers of superb novels.

I am an African American female writer of many genres, residing in Dover, Delaware. I’ve been published-a novel, poetry and other creative works. And several of my plays have been produced. Ghostwriting is another area in which I work. I have a college degree in English, have received literary and theatrical recognition, I belong to an honor society and other laudable organizations, and I volunteer in my community and my church. My next writing project keeps me busy.(I’ve also been published in several journals and magazines).

Wednesday
04Nov2009

query 3

CHOPHOUSE synopsis (blurb):

As a sinister night falls over the laid-back, rural community of Dominic County, a restless evil plots its escape from years of confinement.  A violent storm is on the rise, and before the light of day returns to the quiet woodland town, many will come to believe the gates of Hell have broken open and the Devil's minions have been let running loose to spread terror and death there. For some of the more unfortunate ones, they will not only speculate about it but will have to fight to make it through the dreadful night alive. A family on vacation; a sheriff with a tragic childhood; a scared schoolteacher with a living secret that's seeking an end; an elderly man and his two neglectful sons who've always known the danger existed yet survived unwilling to be afraid of it; a young woman who's looking for love in the wrong place at the wrong time; an outsider ambulance driver who finds himself needing medical care; and a host of other unwitting victims struggling against forces of madness and wickedness unlike anything they would've dared imagine. A diabolic freight train carrying insanity and murder is barreling down the towering, dark woods known to the locals as Horror Hill, and everyone in its way is getting a free-ticket ride to the other side. . . .